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you've framed this so well and so sadly. we all know what will happen, and watching it framed through Feanor's dreams and Finwe's soothing words just seems so sad and ironic. Parents never know that everything will be ok and yet we have to say it will be -- this, plus the amplification of these words so that they have implications on the whole world! Very well done.

'Fëanáro's response was to begin to invent a whole new system of writing'- I love him 🤭🤭🤭 I would do this in the same situation.

Also, I hate Melkor all over again.

Also, I love the last line. This was brilliant, full of furious emotion. What a little firecracker...

 

Thank you so much for this lovely comment! Yes indeed, Fëanor never does things by halves...

And re the last line - I thought hard about 'only his sons'. I wish he could have found more comfort in his family, and not just expected them to follow his lead. :(