Comments on The Last Desperate Seed

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Do we have a definite geography of Valinor somewhere?  I've been going by what I can find on the Gurgle and Tolkien Gateway, and that seems to give me about 600 miles between Tirion and Formenos by the mountain road, or between 4 and 7 Tree-days' travel. What am I missing?

I do like your Terentaule as Brimby's mom:) (argh - can't find the right e in the provided list!)  I have a different dynamic in mind for that pair, but I may borrow her personality!

No, there is not a definitive geography of Aman. So I'd say that what you're missing is that this is a creative piece, written in an instadrabbling session, to serve a creative purpose as a work of Gothic fiction. It is not a treatise on canon. If that's what you want, please avoid my creative work in the future and stick to my scholarship.

I'm glad that you otherwise enjoyed the work.

I don't have much to say because you've used words better than I could, but this was extremely beautiful, and bittersweet like life itself 💗 (I also love the structure!)