Comments on Croissants and theft

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This reminds me of a story I was recently told by someone about how they brought back two almost identical souvenirs from a trip and accidentally caused a long-simmering conflict between two siblings, because they were only almost identical.

I wonder whether Maedhros's stay with Rumil will be quite long enough to make his brothers forget!