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Oh, this is so powerful and painful! I hadn't actually realised it was about Finrod until I read your note, but I think it was even more effective, having it seem to be about an unknown Elf and then finding out that it was someone we 'know'. It feels very much in character for Finrod to be searching for survivors despite his own losses. I found myself thinking about people searching for their loved ones following a disaster in real life, and also about the toll such searches must take on 'professional' rescuers. I love your use of the prompt - this is all wonderfully done.

I wasn't sure it was Finrod, despite the mention of brothers, until you said so.

But the reaction was very convincing for Finrod, both his humanity towards others in the midst of horror and his reassertion of faith toward the end.