Comments on Blood and Copper on the Cliffs

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Very moving! I was especially struck by that angle that he allowed himself to think about Fingon because he thought Fingon was safe in Aman.

(As you asked, I noticed nothing unusual about the tagging, but just double-checking:  from my reading, both Fingon+Maedhros and Fingon/Maedhros seems possible tags, depending on point of view. I suppose you chose "+" deliberately, being aware of both options?)

Thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed that aspect.

And thank you for the sharp eye on the tags, too. You've guessed correctly, I did, and I think it's splendid that the SWG has + as a relationship option instead of just the common & or / as that's a really useful third option. I think it suits them best here, because while for Maedhros the relationship has switched over to a / for Fingon it's still in a state of uncertainty and curiosity/potential, and I like how the + can capture that more layered situation — but if SWG hadn't had the + option, yeah I would have gone with the more basic / instead, as that could certainly apply too (albeit more on one side than the other lol).