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I don't have the words for this. It's so, so beautiful and truly moving. I appreciate how you leave room for tiny, one-by-one movements towards repair of the world, without flinching away from the heaviness of grief or how difficult and painful reconciliation is.

"The wrong done in Alqualondë did not grow smaller; the scrubbed stones remained beneath their feet. But for the first time, the grief of Beleriand stood among them without being made to answer for their own." This is a beautiful expression of the comingling of grief. 

"The wrong done in Alqualondë did not grow smaller; the scrubbed stones remained beneath their feet. But for the first time, the grief of Beleriand stood among them without being made to answer for their own." This is a beautiful expression of the comingling of grief.