we twins of cursed fates by skywardstruck  

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Mirruin and Mírestel


MIRRUIN
S. "jewel of flaming red"

The Valar who forsook us long ago,
And all who dared defy their damned decrees,
They relished in our suffering and woe,
Delighting in our deaths 'neath tainted trees.

"The Noldor shall escape the Valar's ire!"
The people's songs resounded their paean,
Upon the birth of twin-jeweled hope and fire,
That fateful day in fair Eregion.

But one twin, they were bound for Barad-dûr,
To cleanse the wilted world through flame and flood,
A perfect world, His weapon would ensure.
And its beginning must be bought in blood.

The Shadow, all that is and e'er shall be,
'Fore red flame dies and hope yet comes for me.


MÍRESTEL
S. "jewel of hope"

A love there was that bloomed 'yond open gates
'Twixt Úmaia and heir of Fëanor.
A bond that bore them twins of curséd fates,
For darkness soon would bind them evermore.

Their joyful memories would never fade,
Their love of craft, their dreams carved in the stone.
But in the end, that love would be betray'd
By one Ring and the Dark Lord on his throne.

The fallen fire twin was made his wraith,
As hope mourned Ost-in-Edhil's fated fall.
Thus she became an instrument of faith,
With spear that slayed her father shielding all.

The Shadow, small and passing it must be,
When death in flame and hope will set us free.


Two elves with dark skin and black hair. The elf on the left has braided hair and dark spiked armor, wielding a blade of Mordor. The elf on the right has their hair loose and wears silver swirled armour with a Fëanorian star, wielding a long spear. The capes of both elves blow in the wind as they gaze into each other's eyes with pained expressions and their blades clash on the battlefield. The image is drawn in a sketchy hatched shading style.


Chapter End Notes

I hope you enjoyed these sonnets! It's one of my favorite kinds of poems to write, and I love the challenge that the structure presents, to capture complex emotions in limited lines. I had fun with alliteration, finding some interesting rhymes and including quotes from Tolkien in the sonnets, tying the tale of the twins to the themes in the legendarium, and the tragedy of Celebrimbor and Sauron's doomed partnership.

When I received this beautifully heartwrenching artwork of my beloved OCs from 1rabong, I wasn't sure how I was going to utilize it other than displaying it on Mirruin and Mírestel's toyhou.se page. But then I got the urge to write these sonnets and I realized this drawing would be perfect. I hope you enjoyed this glimpse into Mirruin and Mírestel's story; I would love to write more of it someday!


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