I enjoyed this story!  Elros's eager volunteering is very endearing and the interaction between the Maiar and Valar are rather fun.  Elros's lingering issues with his brother elicit sympathy, though.  Thank you!

This was certainly much a lighter contribution than much of what we've had this week. :) Definitely a fun story--thank you!

I always like when Namo pops up suddenly--it's very amusing! :D

This was a fun read, full of humourous moments.  I'll be looking forward to the rest of your Ak-in-Aug stories for more of the same.  But despite the humour, it was nice to see Elros develop from the error-prone goof of his first appearance to the more competent leader of Men at the end, ready to step into his role as the great first king of Númenor.

A very interesting story. I liked the images of the scythe. It must have been hard for Elros to adjust to his new life. I liked seeing things through Eowne's POV.

I loved this story. It was fun to see the events from Eonwe's perspective and how he grumbled about having to be the teacher. Elros was hilarious! But it was also very interesting to watch all the other variables playing into the story, like Elros' feelings of inadequacy, his relationship with Elrond, the Valar's pov... Very nice work!