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That makes me happy to hear! Pictures are for looking at and getting lost in so I'm delighted it brought you some meditative calm, and I hope you enjoyed your swim afterwards!

(Truth be told, I kept coming back to look at this picture too. It's a composite of two of my night photos, but I particularly like the way the glow of the words sits on the water, which was just one of those serendipitous things that happen in the process of creating. It doesn't look as good without them!)

Thank you! It was fun reading and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting here too!

(This is based on an experience I had in the sea once, and I found that while I was reading it yesterda  I was seeing and feeling it all again rather than the words. (And then today the howling gales finally stopped and I've been down to the beach twice to do just as my OC did, again, and again!))