Comments on Lunch Break

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Wow!  This reads like a poem!  It's so beautiful and evocative! ?  Makes me want to be there!

I like this train of thought! I can picture the scenery very well!

But now I am ashamed of exposing my incomplete Silm knowledge- I'm a little worried about what the seagulls were snatching. A ring of power? A shipwright's tool? Someone's hat?