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Brilliant!! Oh, I love the idea that Findekáno would want to come back to Middle Earth once he had been reembodied and I enjoyed so very much his appearance within a Tolkien conference. Elliot must be having the day of their life, honestly! Imagine meeting a hero of the first age!

I'm so glad you loved this cute idea!! Findekáno is just so grateful that people are finding meaning in these stories, and he couldn't help but reveal himself to say thank you. Elliot is absolutely freaking out inside, I'm honestly impressed she kept her composure here because I wouldn't have been able to! Thanks so much for the comment. ♥︎