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Brilliant!! Oh, I love the idea that Findekáno would want to come back to Middle Earth once he had been reembodied and I enjoyed so very much his appearance within a Tolkien conference. Elliot must be having the day of their life, honestly! Imagine meeting a hero of the first age!

I'm so glad you loved this cute idea!! Findekáno is just so grateful that people are finding meaning in these stories, and he couldn't help but reveal himself to say thank you. Elliot is absolutely freaking out inside, I'm honestly impressed she kept her composure here because I wouldn't have been able to! Thanks so much for the comment. ♥︎

Ahhh! I love this wish fulfilmemt! I like that Fingon finally feels safe enough with Elliot to reveal himself and I'm sure they'll grow a marvellous, meaningful friendship together. 

"But even the beauty of this modern world is beginning to fade, with no meaning to be found in everyday life, no greater purpose, no hope for the future." 

I have wondered before about interminable life in Valinor, and I think this may be true of modern Valinor as well as Endorë. The opening of the harbour allowing Elves to return to Middle-earth would be for the mental and emotional wellbeing of both Kindreds.

This is lovely, thank you!

Your comment is really inspiring; I'm so happy this fic has been received well and I do want to write more for this AU! I love that you pointed out that phrase in particular, as the unchanging, static nature of Valinor and the recycled entertainment of today's world parallel each other. I imagine the Elves of Valinor would have their own fantasy worlds to escape to... it opens a lot of worldbuilding possibilities.