Comments on After the Kinslaying

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I love this so much.  There's such a fairytale touch to it, which is very very Tolkien, but at the same time it gives us much more of a complete understanding of the characters than Tolkien does in the Silmarillion.  I never really cared that much about the Swan-ships until now, and you have me mourning every single one; this whole fic really made a part of the Legendarium come alive for me that I've never been able to see before.  Thank you so much for writing it!

(Also, your OC/OC romance worked out GREAT!)

You really brought out the trauma and bereavement, and how Elhen at first feels only the displacement, but eventually the new environment helps her develop empathy with some of the motivations that underlie the Noldor's behaviour, which at first was only shocking in its violence. Like the different degree of emotional dependence on Treelight. It is very generous of her to relent as far as she does, even with that personal bond with Almasulo, as it is clear that her loss of the Swan really and truly cannot be compensated for.

There were a lot of details to appreciate!

Thank you!  Yeah, I tried to write her as someone who is generous by nature and takes seriously her responsibilities to provide food for others and to save people from the Hunter, even though she is very angry about a terrible loss.

I really appreciate your help with this fic!  And thank you for catching the placeholder names, they should be all fixed now (I hope). 

Wow, this is such an unusual look at life in Valinor after the Darkening! I've enjoyed your world-building just as much as your characters as they move through this difficult time and emotions, gradually falling into genuine friendship and love. Thanks for creating this!

Thank you!  The challenge was very inspiring and I learned a lot from it. I had been used to thinking of Valinor as a place where nothing happens, but from the perspective of 'ordinary people' who are responsible for food production of course things happen, things are always happening, the work is always difficult and always important. I appreciate the kind comment. I was also really surprised to find out how much we know about anonymous Teleri. It felt less like writing an OC and more like putting together a canon character from hints in canon. We know less about Finarfin's returnees but still rather a lot, especially if we assume that they were also among those who listened to Feanor and were convinced by him. 

Thank you so much for the kind comment!